Dear Javier Sanchez
Thank you for your advice, it help me so much. Improve my relation with my parents it was a very good idea.
Now i help my parents in house's activities, i tidy my room everyday, do the washing up and others activities and i study everyday i was studying before.
My parents are better with me than before, i can get home later. I feel very happy.
First, I do not know who the writer of this email is since it is not specified. Mistakes to take into account: it helped ( I think you are talking about an old advice), my relationship with my parents has improved, and what was a good idea? which advice did you get?
ResponderEliminarI ( you always have to write it in capital letters), housework ( you do not say house's activities), other ( you do not say others, only in case of pronoun).
You have to pay attention to what you write and I do miss some picture or photo in this email to make more attractive